First of all I want to say that I really like the concept of this photo! The idea is original and speaks to the viewer. The models expression also fits very well to the whole idea of the photo. I also like how you positioned the model!
Techniqually a few things disturb the eye: the background is very busy and distracts the eye from the person. It also seems a bit sharper than the model to me... Maybe you could have picked another floor, or gras. I am a huge fan of blurred backgrounds, so it would be another opportunity to focus on the face and work with an open aperture, so the bg gets blurred.
The t-shirt is very bright and forces the eye to stay there - which maybe was intentional, I don't know
I also would be interested in seeing this photo in colours! Maybe this would have also worked well
All in all I can say this is a very interesting and original piece! Keep it up
yes but its going to be on wattpad. Wattpad is an app for smartphones. And from looking at it made me wanna write and u gave me alot of inspire ment from all your photos when im done or when i write ill send u a link if u want.
i wish but i hope it get lots of views. Somebody may make a fake trailer for it to. I hope u like and ill keep u updated too. U can follow me if u want to . my username is Mooma101 and one of my books is called Alphas and Bloodsuckers.Do u want to be in my book?