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99.365 Walked All Over by forever-just-jess 99.365 Walked All Over by forever-just-jess
I found a whole list of ideas from a year ago with only like three of them done! Since im kinda crap for ideas right now: yay!!!!!! :D

This is part of my "Idiom Series" :)

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First of all I want to say that I really like the concept of this photo! The idea is original and speaks to the viewer. The models expression also fits very well to the whole idea of the photo. I also like how you positioned the model!

Techniqually a few things disturb the eye:
the background is very busy and distracts the eye from the person. It also seems a bit sharper than the model to me... Maybe you could have picked another floor, or gras. I am a huge fan of blurred backgrounds, so it would be another opportunity to focus on the face and work with an open aperture, so the bg gets blurred.

The t-shirt is very bright and forces the eye to stay there - which maybe was intentional, I don't know ;)

I also would be interested in seeing this photo in colours! Maybe this would have also worked well :)

All in all I can say this is a very interesting and original piece! Keep it up :la:
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:iconmooma101:
Mooma101 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is sooo good!Clap Clap  I love it may i use it for a book cover?
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Photographer
thank you! are you talking about a book that you are going to have printed soon? I would love to have my photo used as a book cover! Just message me some more info and we can come to some agreement.
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Mooma101 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes but its going to be on wattpad. Wattpad is an app for smartphones. And from looking at it made me wanna write and u gave me alot of Heartinspire ment from all your photosLa la la la when im done or when i write ill send u a link:happybounce:  if u want. Heart 
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forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Photographer
sounds prety cool. totally send me a link! do you get paid for it or anything?
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Mooma101 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i wish but i hope it get lots of views.Love Somebody may make a fake trailer for it to. I hope u like and ill keep u updated too. U can follow me if u want toHug . my username is Mooma101 and one of my books is called Alphas and Bloodsuckers.Do u want to be in my book? Sweating a little... :D (Big Grin) :happybounce: 
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forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Photographer
no thank you. but please credit me and put a link to my page in the description.
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Mooma101 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanku!ClapLa la la la :happybounce: and i will. 
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jbrenthill Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love it!
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks! ps ( I do too!!))) sssshhhhh....
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Writer
I appreciate these idioms :D
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
why thank you!
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Writer
Welcome :D
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justmejel Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
awesome, that's the clever girl
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
thank you!!
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:iconjustmejel:
justmejel Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
it just occured to me your hair looks like a pool of blood
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
that's a lovely thought...
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:iconjustmejel:
justmejel Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
my brain creaps me out sometimes... It is an awesome pic
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Photographer
ya, i'd agree haha
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Catandhearts Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome piece! love the perspective and concept =)
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks! :D
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Wetterlage Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
The picture leaves room for several interpretation. A very good work!
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks!! :D
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Wetterlage Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
You're very welcome. I like your art! :icongiveflowerplz:
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
aww thanks!
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:iconruss-bailey:
russ-bailey Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
this is a good one!! we all feel like that at times, i'm sure!
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks Russ!! :D
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russ-bailey Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
np
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AppliedPhilosopher Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
The image expresses the idea very effectively.

I hope it wasn't painful to make yourself look "walked over!"
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks!
it wasnt, just dipped some shoes in mud and stamped my shirt. Walla!!! :D
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JWA2277 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Em ......Pretty girl...please don't do this again! I am probably going to have nightmares about ...shoes!
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Photographer
well, your nightmares could be much worse!
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JWA2277 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
????? what do you mean! I don't like to see a pretty face run over!

Happened to a cousin of mine, violists, they trampled her arm flat took years before she could play again! unpleasant!
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
that would be painful
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JWA2277 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was! She is much better now.
She can play, but there is still a hinge in her elbow.
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
at least she can play! Good sides to bad things!
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:iconjwa2277:
JWA2277 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is So!

When life hands you Pompeii, make Cement!

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forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
hahah
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brandojones Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Nice =) Looks good flipped vertically also, fyi. =)
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks! :D
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SageFillyLuna Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing! love the black and white here :)
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:iconforever-just-jess:
forever-just-jess Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Photographer
thanks!! :D
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