99.365 Walked All Over

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critique

First of all I want to say that I really like the concept of this photo! The idea is original and speaks to the viewer. The models expression also fits very well to the whole idea of the photo. I also like how you positioned the model!

Techniqually a few things disturb the eye:
the background is very busy and distracts the eye from the person. It also seems a bit sharper than the model to me... Maybe you could have picked another floor, or gras. I am a huge fan of blurred backgrounds, so it would be another opportunity to focus on the face and work with an open aperture, so the bg gets blurred.

The t-shirt is very bright and forces the eye to stay there - which maybe was intentional, I don't know <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>

I also would be interested in seeing this photo in colours! Maybe this would have also worked well <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

All in all I can say this is a very interesting and original piece! Keep it up <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/>